I am a Year 6 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Ms Bracey.
You have good ideas in this story Denzel - mum and dad went on a trip, they got lost, dad has a gps, then oh no! it was foggy so they couldn't see where they were going. You have a clear problem and solution! Great start.
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You have good ideas in this story Denzel - mum and dad went on a trip, they got lost, dad has a gps, then oh no! it was foggy so they couldn't see where they were going. You have a clear problem and solution! Great start.
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