jack was losst in the forest bout laky he has a flas lihgt bout in to he sore bere he ran and ran in to it losst hem and ha foun a gate to jack it looket like a doorhe was stnding on haze in to he found a car rhe ces wher in the car it was olde bout works
Good start Denzel! I am proud of you for writing and finishing a story, and putting it up on your blog on time! Keep it up.
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